User talk:Ninja Hinder/My story

Reviews

Feel free to review my story here. Ninja Hinder 12:59, 27 September 2008 (EDT)

Good story, Ninja. I'd give it an 8/10.--Jakis 04:19, 11 October 2008 (EDT)

Good job

It is a strong piece. I like how you took such a dramatic turn when "Primo" was killed. It ended a little abruptly, though. 9/10. --Oblivion nerd 23:59, 25 November 2008 (EST)